kadollan | NaNoWriMo and a Meme

I've got just shy of 9,000 words on my NaNo and I'm pretty happy with what I've written so far. I thought I was going to write the HP Shakespearean Romp, but what I seem to actually be doing is working on Avengers short stories.

I'm not sure how that happened, but I just wrote 1600 words of Bucky POV stuff set during Captain America: The First Avenger. ::wibbles::

Anyway, I'm writing some stuff that doesn't suck, so I'll take it. Even if it wasn't quite what I was expecting.

Now, on to the meme! Stolen most recently from

cybermathwitch.

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written, and
comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the
equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I
wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what’s going on in the
character’s heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the
context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that
you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

My fic can be found either here at Awfully Clever or here on AO3.

Play with me!