Broadening my proverbial horizons

So, since I have yet to finish a Harry Potter fic, I thought I'd start an LoTR fic.

Yeah, cuz that makes sense.

Anyway, here for your reading pleasure (and cut for those of you it wouldn't please) is perhaps the begining of something interesting.

( I Know What You Would Say )

Please and sweetly, read and review. This is my very, very first attempt at writing LoTR fic, and I'm interested to know if I'm on the right track, as it were.